literature

Fall Away

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Literature Text

In the coldest of times,
In the briefest of moments
We see the orange of our furies,
The red of our passions,
The yellow of our joys
And cast them off.

New becomes Old
What was wastes away.
Our memories fill
With a bright moon
 And a pale sun,
A time past now long gone.

Fear not these broken times
When the past seems strong,
When the road seems long.
Let the weight fall away
Push beyond what was
To become who you want to be.
Prompt: Fall and themes of fall

Inspiration: Life

This piece is much more personal than any other before it.  I've had my struggles with letting go and becoming a better person.  What you see online isn't exactly the same as in real life and for that I am sorry.  It's a piece that's charged with the feeling of renewal of one's self, as the autumn represents for me.  Hope you enjoy it and Happy Thanksgiving.
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RedLightningNOD608's avatar
Nice man, I kind of got the message you aimed for.
I'm not to good with poetry so I cant be much help sorry.

We all had struggles in life man :icondragoncomfort: